【原创】奥运吟

黄毛刁李 · 发表于 2004-8-16 20:48:12

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圣火光中角逐酣，雅典奥运万人瞻。
中华儿女鳌头立，首夺金牌列前茅。

雅典奥运起雄风，海峡云开两岸通。
两岸健儿显身手，宝岛台湾何时归？

ihakka19820417 · 发表于 2004-8-16 22:27:51

好诗共欣赏，奇义相与析

cherryhk · 发表于 2004-8-16 22:31:52

怎麼沒有說到香港的啊

黄毛刁李 · 发表于 2004-8-16 22:37:39

两地健儿显身手，东方明珠更辉煌。
行不？

cherryhk · 发表于 2004-8-16 22:41:24

嘻更璀璨才對哦

韩江不肖生 · 发表于 2004-8-21 12:09:03

有点象老人大学里的新学生的作品。

鹏城浪子 · 发表于 2004-8-27 15:24:17

Posted by 黄毛刁李 at 2004-8-16 20:48
＊＊＊＊＊＊奥运吟＊＊＊＊＊＊

圣火光中角逐酣，雅典奥运万人瞻。
中华儿女鳌头立，首夺金牌列前茅。

雅典奥运起雄风，海峡云开两岸通。
两岸健儿显身手，宝岛台湾何时归？

恕浪子愚钝，我怎么就读不出半点诗的意境？

黄毛刁李 · 发表于 2004-8-30 14:13:05

清风不识字，何故乱翻书。

南飞雀1977 · 发表于 2004-8-30 15:59:55

Posted by 黄毛刁李 at 2004-8-30 14:13
清风不识字，何故乱翻书。

呵呵，我们的主人说“Diamond cut diamond!”
有道理！

黄毛刁李 · 发表于 2004-8-30 16:03:35

Posted by 南飞雀1977 at 2004-8-30 15:59
呵呵，我们的主人说“Diamond cut diamond!”
有道理！

What is “Diamond cut diamond”?

南飞雀1977 · 发表于 2004-8-30 16:04:37

Posted by 黄毛刁李 at 2004-8-30 16:03
What is “Diamond cut diamond”?

不要问我，问知道的人去！！！

黄毛刁李 · 发表于 2004-8-30 16:16:37

Posted by 南飞雀1977 at 2004-8-30 16:04
不要问我，问知道的人去！！！

stray birds of summer come to my window to sing and fly away.
and yellow leaves of autumn, which have no songs, flutter and fall
there with a sign.

南飞雀1977 · 发表于 2004-8-30 16:34:05

Posted by 黄毛刁李 at 2004-8-30 16:16
stray birds of summer come to my window to sing and fly away.
and yellow leaves of autumn, which have no songs, flutter and fall
there with a sign.

I'm the bird never fly
nowhere to stay nowhere to hide
the fellow with the gun made me cry
He shot me on my side
Only a yellow leave right to find
No sparrow ever came
I'll right be off leaving no sign
:cry:

[ Last edited by 南飞雀1977 on 2004-8-30 at 16:35 ]

黄毛刁李 · 发表于 2004-8-30 16:55:58

Rifle fight and hold up one's head birds

鹏城浪子 · 发表于 2004-8-30 17:04:32

Posted by 黄毛刁李 at 2004-8-30 14:13
清风不识字，何故乱翻书。

看来本社区的“圣人”还真不少！

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